Monday, February 12, 2007

Why Didn’t You See Me? ? Comments

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Thought you and I, inseparable,
Never did I know, any betrayal,
You showed me the meaning,
Yet, I did not see…
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Poornima Kanasen
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Surya . 04 June 2009

oh great/ i could feel your pain.wonderfull write. posted 10 love surya

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Elysabeth Faslund 23 April 2007

As you grow with years, you will find that this hardly ever changes. all you can do is get the hurt and frustration out with words...and these are brutually honest words about love and intentions of the other. And doesn't it feel great that you can write the hurt away...most of the time? Keep writing! !

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Mary Das 20 February 2007

Very touching. Straight from the heart.

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Kee Thampi 19 February 2007

Did you not know that you were apart of me? Did you not understand me? I still saw you, not your betrayal…. Blamed, tortured, hurt and questioned, My heart wanted none of that, But, you insisted, without giving it a second the greatness of a innocent heart made of words

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