Thursday, May 12, 2011

Why Did You? Comments

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Why did you make me do it?
You know you led me on.
If you hadn't started the way you did
I wouldn't have that far gone.
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Orlando Belo
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Victor Ondieki 12 May 2011

Awesome! It’s a masterpiece, I love the internal rhyme and the subject of course, please feel free t read and comment on my poem, ‘In My Dreams, I have Lived the Future’

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