Thursday, February 2, 2012

Why Did I Fall In Love This Time Of The Year? Comments

Rating: 4.3

It is January now and I hate the dryness,
Her dove-like eyes entice me with their shyness;
I hope and pray this month to be dear,
O! Why did I fall in love this time of the year?
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Rishit Desai
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Yash Shinde 27 October 2012

simply elegant and beautiful loved it........ :)

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 June 2012

The same damsel, wears twelve different costumes, but you imagine her as twelve different persons to entertain yourself and us. Well expressed and beautiful as well.

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Chettur Aishwarya Shrivastav 18 February 2012

quite different.... and wow.. keep writing

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Life Goes On 04 February 2012

Twelve damsels, all so different, sculpted as if in clay, Twelve damsels, all so different, I love them each in their own way; The Lord be praised for sending these angels down here, Without this master could I have loved twelve times this year. wow its simply beautiful

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Ramesh Rai 02 February 2012

no matter, love is accident. but keep it up

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