Friday, January 13, 2006

Why Daddy? Comments

Rating: 4.4

What did I do wrong here, daddy?
What did I say to make it end?
Why can't you just love me, daddy?
Why are you stuck in a life that's pretend?
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Crystal Johnson
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Lydia Francese 18 May 2006

Tears came to my eyes. I know you probably wouldn't want mr to go all pity party, so I won't. A really beautiful poem and a 10. -Lydia

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Mary Nagy 14 January 2006

I think many of us that have been turned away by our own parents can relate to this....myself included. I'm so sorry Crystal. Sincerely, Mary

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Adryan Barnathan 13 January 2006

Crystal.......your sentiments are Crystal Clear.........your writing really reaches out and that is a GIFT........thank heaven you have the talent to express your thoughts in a way that touches. You just keep writing....this is a wonderful poem.

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Kimberly Strothman Anderson 13 January 2006

This is a gut wrenching poem. I feel for you. My poem anticipation questions the same thing but, in a different way. I hope you can eventually forgive your dad and move on in love and hope. Blessings to you. Kimberly

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Crystal Johnson

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Maury County, Tennessee
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