What did I do wrong here, daddy?
What did I say to make it end?
Why can't you just love me, daddy?
Why are you stuck in a life that's pretend?
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I think many of us that have been turned away by our own parents can relate to this....myself included. I'm so sorry Crystal. Sincerely, Mary
Crystal.......your sentiments are Crystal Clear.........your writing really reaches out and that is a GIFT........thank heaven you have the talent to express your thoughts in a way that touches. You just keep writing....this is a wonderful poem.
This is a gut wrenching poem. I feel for you. My poem anticipation questions the same thing but, in a different way. I hope you can eventually forgive your dad and move on in love and hope. Blessings to you. Kimberly
Tears came to my eyes. I know you probably wouldn't want mr to go all pity party, so I won't. A really beautiful poem and a 10. -Lydia