i dreamed a boy sitting on chair
and why he is pulling up his hairs
is he failed in some exams
or someone abused him on the ground
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WOW! what a meaningful poem... i really love it.... amazing... gifted...! ! ! go on...! ! ! ! he was silent but he cried his eyes were wet but throat dried like a breeze, in Atlantic sea i loved this stanza alot....
Good write Jaideep... it's not only a poem to me.... I can visualise it... Thanks for sharing...
a very nice and thought provoking poem. at tiomes we don't realize what we are doing and what will be the consequences. well done. you are a great poet.
my salaams to you oh nature lover! ! ! ! ! nice one jai keep writing nd sharing and do read my poems too +10 regards anjali
Nice one....No words to put my praise in words..No wonder you'll gonna be a great up comming poet..Admire the way you present your thoughts.. Regards, Priyaa Arora
a very good poem, if everyone replaces planting at least one tree when the cut one, it will be enough... good one