Monday, October 27, 2008

Why Cant I Make It All End Comments

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if i had the choice today would be my last day
my last day to take in the world
nothing else in this world would make it any better
so many things that go wrong i cant help but make them all want to dissapear
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Darkness Falls
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Wow, I can really tell by how short that was that this is quite emotional and from the heart. I'm sorry though that you've ever had to feel like this, if this is in fact your feelings.

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Keith Hendrickson 21 July 2009

another good piece. you translate your inner thoughts onto paper very well. i liked it

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