Tuesday, January 10, 2012

Why Can'T It Just Wait? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Damn the wrinkles
And damn my hide,
I know this old mirror is
Filled with lies-
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Smoky Hoss
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Adeline Foster 12 January 2012

One that can only be written by one who has been there (or anticipates being there) . Comes to all of us. Adeline

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Juan Olivarez 11 January 2012

Oh Smoky, and you're still a young feller. Wait till you get to be Like my pal Methuselah and I, then you'll really feel it. Great write my friend.

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Eric Cockrell 10 January 2012

and sadly, i am reminded of this everyday! you wrote this very well!

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Dave Walker 10 January 2012

I know what your saying, time will always catch us in the end. But we can try fight it off for a while. I still think i've got one more Fight left in me, so to speak. A great poem. Really enjoyed it.

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