Ah, why can I not love you?
My love only submits to your love
Like the tide
That could not be stopped
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A melodious song of love that sweeps into your heart like high tide. A wonderful poem dear Rose.
Love rises above all the mighty forces of nature and in fact stands as the source of life itself!
I embrace the ripples of divine expression. Appreciated the philosophical undertones. A great poem.
Even if I close my eyes I still feel you Sweep along my skin Fill my heart with desire And I know I know, my love That I am alive............................mesmerizing poetry, Thank you so much for sharing this romantic love song, most beautifully worded. I like this precious gem very much!
3) I cite you here: Even if I close my eyes I still feel you Sweep along my skin Fill my heart with desire And I know I know, my love That I am alive....................................sweetest rendered, Every reader's heart will start beating either. Magnificent love poem. TOP score of 10++++++++.
The answer to the question in the title lies in this beautiful poem, an impetuous love poem, the last line includes that you are alive, he is like the air, makes your heart beating and you feel that you are alive!
Why can't I love you, because your heart is beating constantly, for your only love, as you have described best, with so many impetuous metaphors, starting with the tide, ending... again in your heart, beating constantly for him, your love! WOW! Amazing creation from the honesty within, your beating heart. ToMyPoemList, dear great poet and I can't stop reading this touching poem of your heart's render.
very inoffensively written yet packs quite a sensual impact- -well-done,10++++++
Intensely felt, gloriously written, unforgettable as a Love poem. Which are the most deeply felt and rewarding to write. An unforgettable and very vivid romantic masterpiece., written with the everlasting ink of deep, deep feeling! To my treasure chest as best.
I was very attracted to this- - -> Like the breeze / That kisses you warmly / And so suddenly / Envelops the heart with so much glee. Sounds just like those soft summer breezes! ! And the touch of a loving man. Great write, Rose Marie! 10++
Now, here is the poet on her favourite wicket, and a century should be in her pocket. A straight drive 'long on' to my fav list...
Sweet poem. Richly romantic. Full of devotional love totally submissive. Very beautifully crafted 10+
Quest of love! ! Request and demand! ! ! Waiting, For the Supply! ! ! " Why can't i love you? " Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Love is the best topic to write a poem, and in this poem thoughts and feelings are so nicely painted that it has become a marvellous work.
Loved the sweet way you have expressed your love. Enjoyed thoroughly.110++
Nice poem Rose, but surely you are free to love someone though the person not feel the same. Its not bad i think. Maybe you should write another sequel, Why can you not love me? then it will be another way of looking from two sides.
A well composed lovely poem, dear ate Rose🌹 I love it❤️........10++++
It is pure love that keeps one alive and joyful like the scented breeze of vitality. Top marks and to my favourite