Wednesday, July 7, 2010

Why Bother Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm wasting my time
I can tell,
you've ruined my life
damned me to hell.
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Brandon Brown
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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 04 March 2011

Your feelings embedded in every line for taken for a ride after enticing you. your disapointment ample across every line. be moe circumspect next time and don't fall easy prey.

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Summer Holst 07 July 2010

How many times must people play tricks on another's heart? I dont quite know but don't let a person like her ruin you. You'r poem is a great one and full of emotion about this person. perfect 10 :) <3 Summer

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Zaynab Elzain 07 July 2010

it's ok u should just finde the way to make it work for u, lol jk

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Jennifer K 07 July 2010

but you wont be forever Just give t time, sir =]

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