Why Blame Me A, Blood Moon Comments

a real cosmic poem.wonderful

your visualisation is superb....a novel concept of celestial marriage as viewed from the earth...

A celestial story woven with threads of vivid imagination which propel the reader into another universe. Wonderful!

Heard this beautiful poem in her own voice at facebook and now reading it here. It's an amazing description.

nicely penned mam.... thanks for sharing....

nicely penned mam....

Very beautiful way to look at a blood moon! Two people can look at the same thing and see it in very different ways. Why not look for the light rather than dwell on the darkness? Seems like a good bargain to me. I enjoyed this romantic prose immensely!

i like the poet's notes. but let everyone know: in this sentence of the ‘notes’: “ lose, not loose. i think i was once one to make the same mistake! THIS SENTENCE: “Could have polished this poem a little but have posted in a hurry lest I loose its originality.” ================================== Seema, this one i would like to save for Section D in another month, as you already have one LONG (more than 50 lines) one in Section D in November. i'll try to remember and you can remind me. - - - - - - - - - - - - i love these lines: Moon being slight in demeanor, to impress the discerning bride Puffed his chest, to perigee crowned himself a Supermoon......................i tried the 'supermoon' trick with some women; it DIDN'T work! more favorite lines: Moon all with pride, did a crimson blush deep auburn in hue, Moon was all aflush - - - - - - - - - - - The doomsayer's went on..............want to move the apostrophe to after the s. :) I prefer the “romantic view” though I’m no ‘Romantic’ myself! I wonder what the children of Moon and Earth will look like. hmm? what exactly is the gestation period for the Moon? ? the birth should be another wondrous event to behold! ! LET’S shoot for December for this poem. thanks. bri :) :)

Thank you for this most special verse. An early morning treasure for me. A lesson in loveliness! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing 7: 23 AM EST

Wonderful poem that takes us on a journey of the eclispe. We were unable to see it where I live due to thunderstorms that came through that night, however after reading your poem I now know exactly what it looks like. Lovely picture you painted!

Fantastic. Like mixed jewels of different type in one ornament the words illumines as a clear like picture in sky.

man is always blind to the beauty all around greed and power cover his eyes and treasures waiting are not found thanks for a lovely poem-10

This romantic vision of a celestial weddinng- -the red blush on Moon, s face with the closeness of the bride 'Earth'- -against the backdrop of a Gandharva marriage - is truely mesmering one.Thanks for sharing the wonderful poem.- - 10

Exquisite Poem. So, a lot of thanks dearest poet Seema Jayaraman.

What a fantastic imagery and an equally profound narrative which is by far the most original idea on the subject. The arrangements and the setting for a Gandharva style of marriage has been perfectly visualised. All the customs, groom's and bride's fineries and the very special set of emotions reserved for this wedding day, are just matchless. This is a grand personification of a celestial happening par excellence. Do I still need to thank you for sharing a glittering spectacle with us, Seema ji?

built a celestial altar studded with bodies heavenly As she closed the gap, earth so deeply shy, On Moon's face, cast a deep red dye Earth made her choice, that flaming romantic night with moon in offing a duet And they came so close, While the newly weds, a moment of eternity consummated their togetherness an elopement, on milky white i selected these lines i liked in a separate sheet of paper first and then sat and thought about your genius. wonderful my dear Poetess. simply wonderful give you a 10. i cannot give you more u know. Poemhunter will quarrel with me if i give u more. tony

Down on earth; with the muse of mankind. Nice work.

Outstanding poem, great imagery, nice rhythm and even without the note by the poet, the poem elevates the readers imagination to the highest level of thinking. Following two verses left me speechless........100 out of 10. On Earth's surface Days for Men numbered Fight o'er ill gotten gains will end in disastrous means While the newly weds, a moment of eternity consummated their togetherness an elopement, on milky white

The earth, the moon and the sun- a very beautifully romantic visualisation

Lovely