Wednesday, March 21, 2018

Why Be Jealous? [ 2 Tanka ] Comments

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There is no envy
Nor a bit of jealousy
Between moon and sun
They light the same open sky
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Rajnish Manga 21 March 2018

Nice poem devoted to the futility of being jealous. Let's be positive and discharge our duty with diligence. It will bring joy in our heart and in the lives of people around us. Thanks, Dear Poet.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 March 2018

Nor a bit of jealousy Between moon and sun They light the same open sky Uniquely with their own light..they are not jealous because they are united in eternal love and condemned never to meet......... who knows may be they are meeting hahah.. dont u think so..... thnk u for your poetic heart. tony

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Lamar Cole 21 March 2018

Great poem about why be jealous.

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Nudershada Cabanes

Nudershada Cabanes

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