Saturday, December 18, 2010
Why Are You So Far Away? Comments
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The distance seems to be growing
farther than it was before.
I feel so cold inside,
but where is the warmth I need?
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7/26/2025 3:35:52 PM # 1.0.0
I'll be blunt, it was written in quite a minimalist style, and indeed it is a little juvenile. I do see the potential here, though. What you need to work on is expanding your vocabulary and possibly enhancing the structure of your poems.