Sunday, April 16, 2017

'Why Are You Laughing? '.....[ Short; A Question My Mate Asked Me Recently; 1st Poem I Have Typed On This Dang Tablet] Comments

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Why am I laughing? You may wish you'd not asked.
But I like a challenge, and, to answer, I'm tasked,
so let me see if I can give you a reasonable answer,
and not leave your head spinning like a dervish....dancer.
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Bri Edwards
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Loke Kok Yee 29 June 2017

Spent days figuring if what you wrote was true Decided that 'twas not true though you may argue For I know laughter in your head constantly brew And the humor in you can never be subdued You will laugh even if there's a hole in your shoe Or lose your wallet holidaying in Peru Thanks Bri Hoo! Hoo! Hoo!

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Valsa George 28 April 2017

The ability to laugh anytime is indeed a blessing....! But don't laugh very often when you are alone! Your mate might get baffled and might even think of forcibly taking you to a psychiatrist!

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Annette Aitken 18 April 2017

So you are easyily amused then Bri...good...'cause life can be to serious.; -) Anna x

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 April 2017

That's a kind of poetic intuition, I think. Thanks

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