Tuesday, October 21, 2008

Why And How Comments

Rating: 5.0

sitting on that chair watchin my show
you called. i answered and thats when
my life went down hill. how could this happen
to me? why did she do that? now my life is
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Doha Ewiess 08 February 2009

It is nice....sad, meaningfull and emotional.....I loved it....but i advice you to forget all the past think only of the future....that will be much more hepfull for you.....but nice piece in general....

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Amanda Seltrecht 13 January 2009

I really like this poem very emotional and heart felt. I wrote a poem similar to this about my dads death and the pain that it caused. But I have not submitted it yet, I've been kind of skeptical of whether or to.

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Mimi Fakhira 29 December 2008

Sad and meaningful. Really love it. By the way, who did u lose in this poem? A 10 though.

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Kat Musick 17 December 2008

great poem! i really really liked that.

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