Sunday, September 30, 2012

Why Am I So Confused Comments

Rating: 4.1

Once I was getting very much bored
I asked my mind what to do dude
He said 'Sit quietly, doing nothing,
spring comes and the grass grows by itself'.
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Akanksha Bhatt
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Prachi Rawal 20 September 2020

Haha that is so relatable with me . I wish I could write something like this. Great work👍.

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Sandeep Dubey 28 May 2013

Nice.....U r not confused actually.. :) ..nice one.

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Sandy Player 04 January 2013

It bubbles with Energy! im glad this Is the 1st of your poems I've read, it's a great introduction into you as a poet.

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Sahil Sood 01 November 2012

Great poem.. I njoyed reading it.. Keep writing...

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Kevin Halls 31 October 2012

A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but ignoring that a clever little poem Akanksha. I can tell you are enjoying writing your poems, so keep on writing!

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Dave Walker 23 October 2012

Another great poem, like it.

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Sarojini Pattayat 19 October 2012

good poem Akanksha. Built a strong passion.A poet should not confuse.read Yash's poem.

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Sina Farajzadeh 17 October 2012

Considering your age, it's really nice. Everybody is confused. When naturals seem unnatural, and unnaturals seem natural. Poetry is not a trick, it's just release. Good luck.

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Philo Yan 17 October 2012

This poem is a reflection of the conflicting thoughts that run through every teenage boys and girls. For one, it's your hormones raging but you have the intelligence to think it through and there you have the answer. Poetry verbalizes your thoughts your feelings on paper and in time it will clear the confusion in your mind.

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Aung Si 16 October 2012

A resplendent collection of thoughts humorously penned down.I especially love third stanza.Well done! ! !

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So Close 14 October 2012

good job....! »so close»

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Elena Sandu 14 October 2012

What a delight to read, I can guess the connection tries of heart with the mind, the difference kind of made me wonder: could a perfect balance help to get rid of confusion? Then there will be no more ups and downs, no emotions to give wings to a pen.. Could confusion be a good thing! Yes, I believe so, otherwise we would not have a poem written so nice! Thank you!

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Unwritten Soul 12 October 2012

This is awesome, i like the dimension you took to talk to self and bring your consciousness..sometimes you need your inner feeling and delivered by mind to stop confusion, it may needs time but you will learn it effectively in the future...your poem was nicely written, so keep it up okay_Soul

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David C Probst 11 October 2012

I like the spiritual touch of your poem! A very mature poem for your age!

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Poetheart Morgan 10 October 2012

Poetry can gives to you all free that you still can not reach. Poetry is your true friend. And just to you know! ! ! And Yours questions are ours questions too! ! ! Beautiful poem! ! !

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Akanksha Bhatt 02 October 2012

hello! poets and visitors! ! please also dropp your comments after reading my poems

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Akanksha Bhatt 02 October 2012

hello! visitors! ! please also dropp your comments after reading my poems!

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Neetha Sasidharan 02 October 2012

hey....cool poemm.....nice rhyme.....gud to know that guys of this age r coming up.....i too started writing at the age of 12.....u hv a gud future...come up....

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Ramesh Rai 01 October 2012

in poetry there is no confusion. poetry evolves through emotion emitting from heart and in heart there should be no confusion. it is the reason you have created. good write. keep it up.

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Indranil Bhaduri 01 October 2012

Nice and sweetly written.. Like it a lot!

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Akanksha Bhatt

Akanksha Bhatt

Dehradun India
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