Once I was getting very much bored
I asked my mind what to do dude
He said 'Sit quietly, doing nothing,
spring comes and the grass grows by itself'.
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It bubbles with Energy! im glad this Is the 1st of your poems I've read, it's a great introduction into you as a poet.
A few spelling and grammar mistakes, but ignoring that a clever little poem Akanksha. I can tell you are enjoying writing your poems, so keep on writing!
good poem Akanksha. Built a strong passion.A poet should not confuse.read Yash's poem.
Considering your age, it's really nice. Everybody is confused. When naturals seem unnatural, and unnaturals seem natural. Poetry is not a trick, it's just release. Good luck.
This poem is a reflection of the conflicting thoughts that run through every teenage boys and girls. For one, it's your hormones raging but you have the intelligence to think it through and there you have the answer. Poetry verbalizes your thoughts your feelings on paper and in time it will clear the confusion in your mind.
A resplendent collection of thoughts humorously penned down.I especially love third stanza.Well done! ! !
What a delight to read, I can guess the connection tries of heart with the mind, the difference kind of made me wonder: could a perfect balance help to get rid of confusion? Then there will be no more ups and downs, no emotions to give wings to a pen.. Could confusion be a good thing! Yes, I believe so, otherwise we would not have a poem written so nice! Thank you!
This is awesome, i like the dimension you took to talk to self and bring your consciousness..sometimes you need your inner feeling and delivered by mind to stop confusion, it may needs time but you will learn it effectively in the future...your poem was nicely written, so keep it up okay_Soul
I like the spiritual touch of your poem! A very mature poem for your age!
Poetry can gives to you all free that you still can not reach. Poetry is your true friend. And just to you know! ! ! And Yours questions are ours questions too! ! ! Beautiful poem! ! !
hello! poets and visitors! ! please also dropp your comments after reading my poems
hello! visitors! ! please also dropp your comments after reading my poems!
hey....cool poemm.....nice rhyme.....gud to know that guys of this age r coming up.....i too started writing at the age of 12.....u hv a gud future...come up....
in poetry there is no confusion. poetry evolves through emotion emitting from heart and in heart there should be no confusion. it is the reason you have created. good write. keep it up.
Haha that is so relatable with me . I wish I could write something like this. Great work👍.