Monday, June 16, 2008

Why Am I Crying? Comments

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Lying on my bed in despair
My face covered by my hair
I try to forget my woeful past
And to forget how it ended so fast
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sania harris
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Sebastine Humaemo 21 December 2008

much true sania.......but it teaches us more abt whats life is......sebastine

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The first love especially the one unrequited always hurts the most but it also teaches us to be patient and wait to enjoy the real thing when it comes along in our lives.You have a wisdom beyond your years and you also have stength.I enjoy reading your poems as they give me a window to see your world.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 September 2008

Very simple and touchy poem. Beautiful.

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Shane Clift 16 June 2008

There is another out there, if it didn't hurt you wouldn't learn. Something will give just be patient.

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This is a wonderful poem. Sad, yet very reflective, shows a different side of the poem. But a knife's never the answer. Wait, and see what life has to offer. Nice job.

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