Thursday, July 27, 2006

: Why Am I Coming Undone: Comments

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It hurts everywhere
Inside, it erodes all i have
Outside, i'm sore, my eyes don't shine
I have the strongest urge
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Guarded Heart
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Lesa K 28 July 2006

Beautiful poem. We all need that at times: : : someone to hold us so we can cry, heal the pain, and feel needed and accepted for who we are. You have expressed the raw emotion and sorrow very well here. So sorry for your pain.

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