Why Am I Comments

Hi. read this. Nice poem, just needed to structure differently. keep writing.

passion flows from this, and so does mystery

nice poem i like the feel of it...can you put it into verse form..at present it is in prose reading like a passage

This one as well has lot of passion and feeling put into it.

A great poem about love. When you find the right person Love is the best thing in the world.

Well expressive from your feeling, Sanitra. Love is a surprised gift box, sometimes when you open it you will cheer for the heart inside, sometimes when you open it the box is just a silly joke that hurt most..So there outside you can find many boxes of love and be careful to choose which box they can offer you...May you find a good one :)) Unwritten SOul

i feel ya cuz i can very well relate great poem