Thursday, October 17, 2013

Why? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why had you given me dreams and desires
When you never intended to provide me means to realize them
Why had you given me a life
When you determined not to give me any livelihood?
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Abdul Wahab
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Roseann Shawiak 18 October 2013

Great expression of your feelings, like this poem very much. I too, am always asking these questions. Thank you for sharing your poetry. RoseAnn

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 October 2013

A poem full of feelings. Man's ability of thinking may be the source of questions without answers. Beautiful poem about life. Thank you.

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Heather Wilkins 17 October 2013

many questions are asked from the heart. very emotional

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Dave Walker 17 October 2013

A great poem with questions from the heart, an emotion packed poem.

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Tribhawan Kaul 17 October 2013

Every soul that is troubled seek answers.from HIM, Why me? Why me? The world is cruel but we can not be judge. We have to suffer the follies of others. Your poem brings this essence in a very fine way.10/10

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2013

I read your many poems, especially the latest ones, though I didn't comment on it. I understood each one of them. I agree with you, this poem. Things started changing after I uploaded my photo, too late I realised..Like as you wrote on my poem Chess? I agree I dont know where I stand now, or where the steps went wrong. Tides came and washed away, leaving nothing on shore, just left me blank...

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