Saturday, December 26, 2009

Why? ? ? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why does everyone find the worst in me?
I will be who I want to be!
People always tell me, 'Oh this and that could be better! '
So that is why I am writing this letter!
...
Read full text

rebecca leonard
COMMENTS

Great question that demands answer 'Why? ' You expressed your feelings very well. Keep writing.

0 0 Reply
Becca Leonard 14 January 2010

Dr.subhendu Kar i am sorry i didnt notice it and i was in a rush i am sorry... thank you for all your comments i will take them into consideration! :)

0 0 Reply
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 02 January 2010

THE CLARITY IN YOUR THINKING SHOWS IN THIS POEM...SEE I TOO AM TRYING TO SAY SOMETHING ABOUT YOU...GOOD OR BAD THAT MAY BE

0 0 Reply
Chitra - 28 December 2009

self-reflection and then realization of being unique..well written

0 0 Reply
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 28 December 2009

All i can say is that your 'Why? ' is better than mine :) so keep it up..

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success