Wednesday, June 20, 2007

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Why cant I get you out of my head?
Why cant I get rid of all the things you said?

Why do I feel so much pain?
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Shaina Lloyd
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Abha Sharma 24 March 2008

the rhetoric tone makes the reader read it in one breathe....good one

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Ryan M 20 June 2007

awesome, awesome and awesome! i know why i like yur poems so much, cuz they are like mine in many ways, with the rhyme scheme and subject matter. great stuff! RGM

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