Wednesday, July 15, 2009

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Why does this this day seem to go this slow,
Why must I wait this long to see you,
My ideas are dying out.
My imagination is starting to deteriorate as time goes,
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alexander Peralta
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Indira Renganathan 10 August 2009

Sickening waiting superbly said....normal aspect of love generally seen....good writing

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Chitra - 15 July 2009

incessant waiting almost kills the spirit of living..well said

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