Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Why? Comments

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Why do you hurt me and cause me pain?
Why do you ridicule me again and again?
Is there a reason for this terrible dispute?
Or are you being horrible like you always do?
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katie badham
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0sifo Tolu 31 May 2010

is ds really happenin 2 u or its jst an imaginary poem..well, nice combinations...

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Lefix Onyango 06 May 2010

i don't mean to be rude but, it seems like your friend has been causing you a lot of pain... and about the format of writing you r poems they reflect the deep desire to express your feelings...

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Matt Mooney 23 April 2010

The poems Why and Unknown seem to be related or maybe in sequence in your life.I like your apparent honesty in all of your poems. They are worth the read and and your next one could be the best one.Best Wishes.

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Chan Jee 01 March 2010

friend, I read your poem WHY.I think you have troubles and continuesly raise your voice against the cruelity of your freind.i think you are looking for a behave as you have and you failed to get it. your poem long last affect on the reader.

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