Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Why Comments

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Why do I feel the way I do. The urge, the need to be with you. I need to know why, why is it you make me wanna go run and hide, from everyone else, so that there's no her, him, he or she. No one else but you and me?

Why do I wanna cry for the simple things, like looking in your light brown eyes. Could it be I'm in love, If not what is this wonderful feeling from up above? It can't be hate b/c I appreciate everything you do. Your eyes and your smile brighten up my day. I want to say alot just not today.
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Lakera Lloyd 28 April 2009

like it love u its great

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Malcolm The Last. 07 April 2009

Your poem is good, but i hope you will be a bit more poetic. Remember, this is poetry, not comphrehensive language.

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