Tuesday, November 18, 2008

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the blade
against my skin
because i think I've committed
a sin
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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 22 November 2008

A contrasting poem, for it has a cowardly contrast to the poet's name! And...also goes on to show the pathetic state of mind in which depression takes one. I can only say that if you are here, writing poems, and sharing them with us, than you are a very courageous, beautiful and gifted human. You have a lot to do for your country; till your blood lasts, that is, and not lost, like this.

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Lee Bredeson 19 November 2008

what a strange way to get out anger man.

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Nellie Bredeson 18 November 2008

Ummm... its an okay poem I guess. what a way to let out your feelings, but I hope it doesn't continue

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Billy Joe Collins 18 November 2008

i use to think the red drops was my healing tears letting the pain out, that's why i started writing poem. well wrote poem thanks for sharing

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