i asked myself why?
i have no answer
i asked people why?
they did'nt have the answer either
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Life is very complex than we do see it around us; but, we don't have to give in our dreams.So, one day, you will surely know 'WHY'. That is a very nice poem.Thanks. Edward Kofi Louis
sometimes the echo is not heard coz it is converged into one strong emotional being like you very nice write
you have asked the question 'why' which everyone asks.. some openly and some in silence.. nice poem, ,
wow what a poem i like it most i had never read this poem before jhon fernandis real name aman mahajan fjhon59@yahoo.co.in
Why do we all ask questions, eh? From the time we can speak, we ask 'why? ' I guess it's part of being a human being and part of the mystery of the journey we call life. Your words certainly got me thinking. A thoughtful poem in a melancholy key and a final line that answers her own question. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
O.k., Mimzy....I got your message....and you got my attention....And my assessment on your work is this: Quite commendable for a young writer, and indicationa of a vast spectrum of potential. nioce Work, young lady...Keep that pen pumpin'! ~ F j R ~ ((((((()))))))
10 Very Well Said Love it
The life journey we endure is only the begining.............there's another one which is much bigger! ! ! Nice piece Mimzy.
A great start with a nice poem, Mimzy. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks