Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Why Comments

Rating: 3.4

i asked myself why?
i have no answer
i asked people why?
they did'nt have the answer either
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mimzy sue
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Mimzy. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2008

Life is very complex than we do see it around us; but, we don't have to give in our dreams.So, one day, you will surely know 'WHY'. That is a very nice poem.Thanks. Edward Kofi Louis

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Reetessh Sabrr 06 November 2008

sometimes the echo is not heard coz it is converged into one strong emotional being like you very nice write

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Srujini M 04 November 2008

you have asked the question 'why' which everyone asks.. some openly and some in silence.. nice poem, ,

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Jhon Fernandis 02 November 2008

wow what a poem i like it most i had never read this poem before jhon fernandis real name aman mahajan fjhon59@yahoo.co.in

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Alison Cassidy 25 October 2008

Why do we all ask questions, eh? From the time we can speak, we ask 'why? ' I guess it's part of being a human being and part of the mystery of the journey we call life. Your words certainly got me thinking. A thoughtful poem in a melancholy key and a final line that answers her own question. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Jerry Hughes 24 October 2008

Excellent, just watch your spelling little one...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 09 October 2008

O.k., Mimzy....I got your message....and you got my attention....And my assessment on your work is this: Quite commendable for a young writer, and indicationa of a vast spectrum of potential. nioce Work, young lady...Keep that pen pumpin'! ~ F j R ~ ((((((()))))))

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Ivor Hogg 09 October 2008

Perhaps that is why we live to seek the answer

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008

Lucid and truly nice poem. 10+

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10 Very Well Said Love it

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 September 2008

The life journey we endure is only the begining.............there's another one which is much bigger! ! ! Nice piece Mimzy.

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