Saturday, December 8, 2007
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Why does my life have to be corrupted?
I'm enduring harshly my pain inside,
I'm so desperate in this striking nature,
Still I am a student and feel so lonlely,
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Jhonny Thermidor
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Evaughn Gray
22 December 2007
there are so many questions in this world that sadly i have no answer to..if i did though i would gladly give them to you, i have these same unanswered questons..great poem...~hazel
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7/25/2025 8:21:03 PM # 1.0.0
i think you could go further with this poem. it's good, but it needs more sauce. keep going, i felt like your mind was reeling, so let it go more!