Tuesday, October 11, 2005

Why? Comments

Rating: 3.8

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A word that all human wants to be,
including me! !
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Qistina Zaini
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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 24 October 2005

i am a perfectionist so i could really relate to this...keep writing and i will keep reading your work! Best regards-Faith

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Andrew Philips 11 October 2005

Nice start to this piece. But you jump to suddenly from one piont to the next. If it flowed better, your poem might be a more enjoyable read. Keep at it! , Andrew Phillips

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