Sunday, August 30, 2009

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why? is man or woman chosen to be
or do we create our own destiny?
if man sits idley by
and does not even get up to try.
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Sherry Atbutterfly 19 October 2013

I know we are here to be tested by the Lord above. I am legally blind. I can read but have to enlarge the font to see the words. I am glad that I can be in both worlds, totally blind and part blind, so that I can know what I face for the future. I enjoy all your poems. :)

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 February 2010

why and why...our never ending cry.. He give us life...He offer His love... Enough for us to believe and and live the life we have... I love your thoughts..I really like this poem.. touching... 10+++ Maia

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'To try to create or do our best' Rachel Ann Butler

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

and asking the LORD up above 'why? ' can't we understand love.......key lies with us instead of asking our lord.. He guides us to long for love and feel but we fail to catchthe spirit and love.....bautiful write. i loved it....10 what happens, ... what to morrow...you go alone

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 12 September 2009

simple questions lead us to brighter days...a lovely poem

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Surya . 07 September 2009

beautiful poem.good questions asked.set the thinking cap active voted10 surya

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Christine Kerr 05 September 2009

It's always been a question in my mind as to why someone wouldn't want to do the best that they can. Real pride has fallen to the way side and false Pride has stepped in. Great creating

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Kranthi Pothineni 31 August 2009

Why, is a word which puts us on motion. Nice theme and craft.

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awesome poem.. awesome poem.. awesome poem

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