Wednesday, January 8, 2014

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What I gained from this span of life,
I just made a survey on my conscience.
Compulsorily I had seen there
Two fine drawn columns
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Mallika Achuthan Menon
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Edward Kofi Louis 30 July 2016

All my attempts ended in vain! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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A soul searching poem and mysticism seems to be a part of this poem being the feminine feelings it describes and such situations of negativity but there are enough opportunities and lucks in any circumstances or differences on life journey and the theme is taken up with such importance and wonderfully created it into a nice poem.

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Rajendran Muthiah 31 March 2014

Being unable to get answers for the multiple creations of God, you keep a folder(drop box) in your mind which has a memory cord of 1000GB. The baby is born crying out making its mother happy but as grows he becomes reserved, inconsistent due to the contact he gets from humans and the environs.' Frailty they name is feminine'. As the woman is unstable, the things move on. Every stanza ends with your question. Philosophical!

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Ramesh Rai 26 January 2014

a very beautiful write. keep writing.

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Khairul Ahsan 09 January 2014

The poem is a bit too long, but an honest soul searching. I agree with Valsa George in to to. @ Ed Nigma, As opposed to the man about whom you heard, I am very inquisitive and always ask a lot of questions. I am happy nonetheless, thank God!

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Valsa George 09 January 2014

Life poses endless questions, finding answers is almost impossible! So go on with life as it comes and respond to life as it demands without ingnoring one's conscience and without losing self trust! Getting approval or love from everyone is a rosy dream. People are more prone to cause misery and hurt, inspite of our benevolent approach! A very philosophical introspection of life! !

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