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Languages are developed by making spelling easy. At the initial stage many object but ultimately accept it. Think of Hindi word Suhagan. Initially it was Subhagan which means a woman having good fate. A women whose husband is alive is considered as a good fated woman, and was called subhagan. Gradually it became suhagan and being used widely was accepted and included in the dictionary.. More important are the thoughts presented in a poem, in an artistic manner, attracting the readers. We write for others. Thoughts presented in this poem are nice and in an artistic manner. That is enough to rate this poem as very good.

HY OR HI? ? [i would pronounce them the same, but i think you meant hi.] i guess i can live with boy not rhyming as well as the other line-ending words! tfs. bri :)

Short & brief, still very deep....a well find poem..great

Very good Hira, ur teacher was quite right saying that there's no place in this world for a coward guy, be bold and strong,

Very good Hira, ur teacher was quite right saying that there's no place in this world for a coward guy, be bold and strong,

very nice Hira.short and sweet.keep inking.

May mother rest in peace again a nice poem deserve voting