Sunday, May 26, 2013

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Why do you only see me when I cry,
And not when my eyes are dry.
Only when my happy heart is broken,
And not when happiness has spoken.
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R. K. Hart
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Elena Sandu 02 July 2013

I am running away from all religions... Yet deep inside are a few memories...your beautiful poem reminded me the words of a dear peaceful one who now is passed away: We human being keep god hanged like a hat in the hall room. We remember him only when we are in need. Thank you for share.

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Ramesh Rai 25 June 2013

last line is the essence of poem

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Shahzia Batool 06 June 2013

Good! You have the convincing power!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 May 2013

lovely balancing poem with a message nice keep it up, plz read mine if time allows you

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R. K. Hart

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