Sunday, August 18, 2013

Whose Walk Was It I Walked Comments

Rating: 4.8

The last days, old and frail.
When death's lullabies lure me in
And the tears kiss the ground no more
But grey cloudy eyes, and yes!
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Khairul Ahsan 08 September 2013

As those tears make that long awaited Pilgrim down my cheeks But only halfway and fade away Taking me along the way. Beautiful depiction, truly poetic!

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Mbuyiseleni Madlala 23 August 2013

woooow what a powerful poem, this is a super poem. keep it up cc, realy like the use of languege (words)

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 August 2013

Superb poem Nonto, very well written and though provoking, I'm commenting for the second time on this poem, PH stole my first comment hope they won't steel this one. Siya_! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 August 2013

Deep poem Nonto, excellently written and though provoking. Siya_! !

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Unwritten Soul 18 August 2013

If we can jump into every shoe in this world for a while, i am sure we will amazed and scared at the same time...we will back to sober and thankful that we are living in better days than some of us who struggle more than what we think we suffered a lot_Soul

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Dave Walker 18 August 2013

A great poem like it.

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