Monday, August 31, 2020

Whose Conscience Is It? Comments

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He held her hands
She closed her eyes

He kissed her on her eyes
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Indira Renganathan
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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2020

Well executed having an outstanding outlook. I cite.....He stood silentl, then Sorry' he said Whose conscience is it? Stop smoking' it says. This is really a beautiful poem on pain from smoking and conscience.

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M Asim Nehal 31 August 2020

Wow so well thought and written, eyes are so sensitive to realise a smoker kissing it, Awesome. End was really surprising...100++

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