Sunday, February 10, 2008

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I have driven in fast,
bunching up with them in the keyhole,
tripping, crowding, drawing fouls;
sliding away on my back
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Gary Witt
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Tom J. Mariani 07 May 2008

I attempte to use a basketball image in a poem I wrtoe in 2001. Your poem reminded me of it, so I took it out dusted it off and posted 'Just Enough To Win.' Thanks for the reminder. Tom

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Junior Pocoloco 10 February 2008

Reading your poem twice I just discovered that I enjoy sports in a poem. thanks for that. I don't remember ever reading any before. I might write one sometime in the near future myself. Junior

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