Whom You Trust? Who? Comments

Hard to keep! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

there is some good observation and advice in this poem. of course a lot of people will still follow their heart, and SOMETIMES that will work out just fine! ! a little rhyming is nice. too much rhyming sometimes gets in the way [but not always; i almost always use rhymes, hopefully successfully]. but as a native-speaker of English i SHOULD have more English words in my head to work with to rhyme successfully! ! nice one, Ging. i'll send to MyPoemList and put it into my/our June showcase for PH poets on my PH site. thanks. bri :) p.s. “Even your shadow leaves you in the dark.” i agree with Lyn Paul: Amazing words. well, the words aren't amazing, but the way you use them is clever and very effective! other favorite lines: Can't trust your tongue. and But heart move w/out consulting the 'Master Mind'.

..Even your shadow leaves you in the dark.. Amazing words. Thank you .

Trust is a belief Belief is blind Blind belief is love Love is trust Trust self And be loved