Saturday, July 21, 2012

Whom Should I Blame! ! Comments

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All my craving, all my love,
Is like a cloudy sky,
Failing to bring rain,
I know my love U want me too,
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Saeed Jan
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Farah Ilyas 08 April 2013

Though a fault a little is ours, We must accept, we were sluggish, That kept a sea of fire in bosom, Without giving it a vent, Whom shall I blame, God or ourselves? Was that our fate... love to read these lines...great

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Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

great iamgery......wonderful use of hyperbole.........great great write indeed :)

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Erica Santana 25 September 2012

Pretty good dedication to the one you love

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