Tuesday, March 6, 2012

'Whole' Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Storm, the Thunder and the Rain
pulled the very life from our souls.
Love, respect, compassion and understanding ingrained
made the life meaningful and the reunion ' WHOLE '.
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Yamini Khanna
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The Prince Of Darkness 13 March 2012

Very nice and well written but you wrote the twice in the 4th line of your first verse.

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