Tuesday, January 17, 2006

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Love is not an act
Nor is it simply a feeling.
It is many things
Crammed into four letters.
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Guppie Stokes
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Neisha Williams 18 January 2006

I really like this poem, Barni. You have some very good metaphors. I really like the line, 'love is really a lifestyle.' I also like the line, 'love is who you must find.' I never really thought of love as a lifestyle before, but your comparison reminds me of Margaret Atwood's poem. The truth of the poem makes you think, while the reality of it makes you smile. Great.

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Aj Whitten 18 January 2006

Hey good job Barni aka Guppie aka Barni. I liked it!

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