Who Would Of Known.....About Your Concept! (July 10th) Comments

Complexity in such denial situation made the flows of words become so beautiful and I must say this is a lovely poem....

I like this poem very much - the simple idea flowing and link to the other and make a beautiful great-concept thanks for sharing :)

Perhaps the title could read- Who Would Have Known... About Your Concept-. It is commendable that you wish to write a Book of Poetry. There are grammar courses which will enhance the brilliance of structure in writing poetry. Spelling is of the essence. Note: ‘there’ means ‘in that place’; ‘their’ means ‘belonging to them’; the contraction of ‘they are’ is ‘they’re’. Adeline

Expressed everything in and out...it was an interesting write_Soul

nice way to expand the mind, a great read nicely written

Bravo! A reservoir of powerful words and rich imagery! Well penned and poignant dear Stevens! I am also in the process of putting out my first book! But do not rush since you are talented and young and you plenty of time to polish your writing skills and expand yourself throughout the World! i wish you luck but take your time! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! If time permits, please read and I hope you enjoy reading my poem titled: Ÿoung Butterflies God Bless You! Romeo-New York City