Friday, February 10, 2006

Who Would Have Guessed? Comments

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My grandma had a special guest,
he had been told, 'young man, go West, '
by folks who knew whereof they spoke,
they also liked this handsome bloke.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 February 2006

That's because I never know at the start of a poem (seldom) where it will take me. Best HH(jr)

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You're more American than George W., Haughty Haines...and Mary's right, although I am enamored of your perfect rhyme...it is a bit of a creepy poem...

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Mary Nagy 10 February 2006

Fun poem with a creepy ending..........I like it! Great job as usual. Sincerely, Mary

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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 February 2006

No, Zainab, only some do.Thanks for your comment. But you live in a beautiful place. Best H

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Zahraa Song 10 February 2006

I always suspected Herbert was a doctor...Am I right? Your poems always have a medical aspect to it

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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 February 2006

Gina, you most definitely should. Best H

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Gina Onyemaechi 10 February 2006

Hey, Julia, that's what I've told him! ! As for you, Dr H, I'd say this puts you streets ahead of the others in Mr Shepherd's competition (I have only read 2 other pieces, mind) : -) Reckon I should have a crack? G.

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Julia Klimenova 10 February 2006

It reads much like the scary tales of Roald Dahl. It is funny. Nice write. Julia

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Zahraa Song 10 February 2006

Very entertaining...Grandma is a bit eerie though. Nice read! ! Zain

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