Sunday, November 15, 2009

Who Will Stop Comments

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Who will stop these tears of joy
Who else but the cause
To whom these tears I owe
Who else but the cause
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 November 2009

very well expressed...more like a song on joy and grief

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or, 'who' is the cause sounds more appropriate with the 'whom'..... If Americans could only even consider this poem, perhaps we'd exit the two wars that seem to be mysteries that manifested for our honor, all the while our country searches for answers to the new elevated levels of poverty and depression. I hope we figure it out over here. Thanks for sharing such valuable ideas.

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kaveri padamini 18 November 2009

what is the cause? .......good....I can understand the feelings

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