Hmmm,
How do you-
or
is there even
...
Read full text
This really grabbed me Noemi. So tightly structured and a theme that refuses to go over the top. Written from a woman's view I feel that you suceed in portraying a universal issue. Yes, there will be those who will find much to empathise in this, but I feel that that is not your intent. A very impressive read my friend.
Brilliant write, Noemi... I love the way the poem developed and you stuck the ending! ! Brian