Monday, January 31, 2005

Who Will Punish Time? Comments

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At the sound of the gun
The squirrel falls dead
Who will mourn him?
Rain.
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samuel nze
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Rich Hanson 31 January 2005

The best of the poems that you posted today. A clever concept for a poem, crafted well.

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Amberlee Carter 31 January 2005

I think you're on to something here, but kinda lost steam at the ending. I liked it up to the point where you answered your own question. always, Amberlee

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