Tuesday, March 19, 2019

Who Will Gaze At Me? Comments

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Thousands and thousand miles away
Very high up in the sky
With umpteen shining lights
Who will gaze at me?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 March 2019

I AND THE only blind GALAXY STAR have read each word so far one day I will also may not be but don't care who will read me just send an orange if u please my mouth goes dry loudly reading ye DEAREST POET MAM JI

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Suzon Albert 20 March 2019

Every creator fears about this but those who are least bothered by such things they ultimately succeeds. A food for thoughts poem, nicely penned. Asim.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 March 2019

A brilliant poem! The last stanza unfurl the naked truth! I sincerely appreciate the way you have expressed things emanating from the core of a poet's heart! (10)

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