Monday, February 16, 2009

! Who Will Be There For Me? Comments

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At the end of the day when all is still
I've earned my pay, like I always will
My job is done, no more wells to fill..................
But who will be there for me?
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Linda Ori
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Ridge Cahill 17 February 2009

A marvelous poem, Linda. We all need someone, particularly at those critical moments that you so eloquently conveyed here. I am struck more so by the thought of the person finding an inner peace, that the “who” is he. But there need be someone to expose the soul for it to be contemplated in the first place. The question of 'who will be there for me' is evidence to that fact. So “who” will expose the soul and therefore be there….? Your talent is boundless. Extraordinary poem.

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Matt Turner 16 February 2009

My kind of poem, well done.

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