Wednesday, October 17, 2007

Who Who Comments

Rating: 4.3

The cat’s on the table, the geese in the yard,
the parrot is screeching, the dog’s on his guard,
the brown leaves are falling, the succah is wet
and squirrels are stealing, the deadline’s not met,
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Linda Hepner
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Gina Onyemaechi 17 November 2007

That's what you get for being super-fit and super-energetic: your loved ones see you as a mighty rock! Well-conveyed sense of frustration and dismay. Especially love the last stanza. And the masterly rhyme as ever. Love, Gina.

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Raynette Eitel 20 October 2007

Oh, how many times have I felt the same way! Very well put....and your rhymes are absolutely seamless. Raynette

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