Sunday, August 9, 2015

Who Was The Girl Comments

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The girl with those mesmerizing eyes,
Eyes filled with love,
The beautiful wheatish skin,
The natural beauty of a pearl,
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Sara Javed
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Alisha Charles 21 December 2015

This a lovely poem. continue to write sara.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 August 2015

I too mistook the girl as the poetess herself, but when I read her reply to Me Myself And I, i have no alternate but to think the poetess unconsciously imagines her childhood. Even if the girl is not the poetess and just an imagination, at least nonsense of her childhood is reflected in that girl who was lost with the childhood. It's a graet poem.................10

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Sara Javed 13 August 2015

Thank you! I am grateful for your comment. Xx

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Me Myself And I... 09 August 2015

For it was you.....x x

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Sara Javed 10 August 2015

Haha, not at all! I was just immature then.This is my first poem. I now truly believe, that love doesn't exist.

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Sara Javed

Sara Javed

Lahore, Pakistan
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