Saturday, April 8, 2017

Who Was It Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who was it that passed me on the street today?
I was preoccupied and did not notice.
They were a blur and a shadow disappearing.
I turned but could not recognize a familiar walk.
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 11 April 2017

Nostalgic hues in the painting of life's pace!

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Nosheen Irfan 10 April 2017

So beautifully depicted...growing old is part of life but it takes some effort to come to terms with it. Memories float around us n things we have forgotten might come out of subconscious mind to strike us with force. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 10 April 2017

You get it completely. Even I am amazed by my thoughts and dreams. I think this is because I am not only old but ill. I think I have come to terms with it pretty well. Writing has been a huge support for me. As always Nosheen, thank you for the comment.

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Jaya Das 09 April 2017

Now, this is a very beautiful poetry....how aging fades the memories of a person...simple yet profound!

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Barry Middleton 09 April 2017

Thanks. Fades the memories and everything else.

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