Who Took My Humour? Comments

stanza 4: did you leave out a word, or did P H steal it? ! to MyPoemList. a wonderfully humorous story about humour/humor and mother/daughter. bri :)

The value of humor is here creatively composed.

Interesting and well structured. Great thought pattern.10+

I bet she's a teenager... try'Smile' if you get time.

I think you got your humour back in the end...I think the title is funny too...funnyness makes life a joke, that doesn't sound right oh well you know thanks and regards

pain, doubt, fear of loosing joy all these ideas came in to yur poem. it is clear and easy to understand. thank u for sharing. tony

Lovely! You have the gift of poetry and the natural flow of your words are so enjoyable to read. 10+++++